A Clockwork Prison – published in The Arcanist!

My sci-fi short story, A Clockwork Prisonhas been published in the wonderful online magazine, The Arcanist. This is the first time someone’s paid me to publish my writing, so I’m feeling super happy right now!

Here’s an excerpt:

The Prison Warden welcomed me into his office. He poured iced tea into a glass and filled another cup with engine oil.

To check out the rest of the 870-word story, you can read it for free online:

>>> read A Clockwork Prison <<<

And of course if you have any thoughts/comments/critiques, let me know in the comments below!

[Article] 6 best 2017 EscapePod episodes (and what writers should learn from them)

EscapePod is one of those podcasts that makes you grateful for having ears. New sci-fi short stories, delivered to my phone every week? Yes please!

Every episode is top notch, but these 6 episodes from 2017 have taught me particularly useful lessons about writing.

1. The Ghosts of Europa Will Keep You Trapped in a Prison You Make For Yourself by Matt Dovey

This story is short, punchy, and exemplifies the ethos of ‘entering late, leaving early.’ This is such an important lesson for short story writers. Readers like short stories because they deliver a swift emotional punch: to paraphrase Mary Robinette Kowal, if a novel is the literary equivalent of watching every game of the World Cup, a short story is like watching a 5-minute World Cup highlights video. Give the readers the good bit, then get out.

2. Seb Dreams of Reincarnation by Aimee Ogden

Short stories can seem like they’re … well, too short. Too short for meaningful change, or grand scope, or a broad cast of characters. Not this one. Ogden’s story is a sweeping exploration of a war veteren’s recovery, and how he touches the lives of the people around him. It’s a grand achievement that displays how character arcs can be rich, deep, and satisfying – no matter how short your story is.

3. Miss Figgle-DeBitt’s Home for Wayward A.I.’s by Kurt Pankau

As you can probably guess from the title, this is a wonderfully whimsical story. My biggest takeaway from this was the important of tone. Good writers understand tone, and once they’ve discovered the emotional atmosphere of their work, they can use this knowledge as a creative filter, so that everything in the story strengthens, explores, and reflects this tone.

4. Two Steps Forward by Holly Schofield

This was one of the first EscapePod episodes I listened to, and it marks the point when I realised how good audio fiction could be. This story is a fantastic two-hander, and is a masterclass in dialogue. Each of the characters have an agenda, but approach it obliquiely through their conversation – leading to readers trying to fill in the blanks (and thus immerse themselves in the story).

I also love the strong, whimsical, ‘golden age’ tone Schofield creates. It’s a mark of quality that I still love this story after over a year from listening … even if I can’t remember a single word from it. Just shows that texture trumps tone: that people forget what you say, but always remember how you made them feel.

5. A House of Her Own by Bo Balder

Wow. That’s all I thought after the end credits rolled. Wow.

If stories are about touching readers emotions, then this is a gold medal winner. The ending is unexpected, devestating, but dramtically satisfying. Balder isn’t afriad to paint characters in morally ambigous tones: this isn’t a world of heroes, or villains. It’s a world – an amazingly imagined one – of people, whose actions might seem amoral out of context, but are inevitable within their worldviews. (In some ways, it reminds me of my chat with author Gabe Bergmoser, where he discussed his love for how Red Dragon by Thomas Harris also muddies the line between hero and villain).

6. Four Seasons in the Forest of Your Mind by Caroline M. Yoachim

It took me ages to realise what was happening in this highly metaphorical short story. That’s why I loved it. Yoachim drip-fed me the clues to her plot slowly, revealing her hand of cards one small step at a time. This slow information ‘dripping’ is perhaps the story’s biggest lesson (it’s a lesson also shown in Harry Potter, which I analyse here).

Equally, however, the story also demonstrates the breathtaking potential of non-conventional POVs. Sci-fi writers have an amazing opporunity to examine existence from non-human perspectives, and it’s exactly what Yoachim does here – to great affect.

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Want more analysis of sci-fi stories? Then check out my podcast episode on Neuromancer, by William Gibson, in which I extract 6 key writing lessons from this genre-defining cyberpunk classic.

What are your favourite EscapePod episodes? Have any other sci-fi short story podcasts you’d like to recomend? Let me know in the comments below!

6 – Neuromancer by William Gibson – 6 Lessons for Writers

Neuromancer was a 1984 genre-defining novel – and it still has a lot to teach writers today. Settle in as I extract 6 key lessons from this ground-breaking sci-fi novel.

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Shownotes:

Neuromancer by William Gibson

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5 – Gabriel Bergmoser Interview – Windmills, Boone Shepard, Movie Maintenance, and Red Dragon by Thomas Harris

Today I’m changing things up from my normal analysis format by interviewing Gabe Bergmoser – one of my favourite Australian authors.

Gabe is the author of Boone Shepard, Boone Shepard’s American Adventure, and the forthcoming Boone Sheppard: The Silhouette and the Sacrifice. He’s also a prolific playwright, winner of the Sir Peter Ustinov Television Scriptwriting Award, host of Movie Maintenance, and contributor to Movie Maintenance Presents.

In this far-ranging interview, we talk about:

  • how he’s evolved alongside his Ustinov-winning Windmills
  • his feelings towards his soon-to-be-completed Boone Shepard trilogy
  • how he approaches writing, and what his experience has taught him
  • what it takes to create engaging writing-related podcasts
  • Red Dragon by Thomas Harris (and we dive deep into analysing this fantastic book)

Enjoy!

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Gabe’s top books for writers:

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Harry Potter (I covered The Half-Blood Prince in episode 3)

Red Dragon

The Book of Joe

The Picture of Dorian Gray

Tommorrow, When the War Began

On the Road

A Song of Ice and Fire

The Name of the Wind (I covered this in episode 1)

 

 

 

 

4 – The Moon is a Harsh Mistress by Robert Heinlein – Writing an Amazing Midpoint

Done poorly, midpoints can bog down your story with annoying slowness. That’s not the case in today’s novel, which showcases one possible solution to avoiding the dreaded soggy middle.

Listen here.

Shownotes:

The Moon is a Harsh Mistress by Robert Heinlein (affiliate link – using it will give me a tiny bit of money, at no extra cost to you)

Episode 3 – Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince by J. K. Rowling – Creating Suspense Using Question Arcs

Harry Potter is successful (amoung many other reasons) for Rowling’s fantastic use of suspense and mystery. Today, I analyse how you can use question arcs to create suspense in your own writing, and how suspense destroys ‘soggy middle syndrome.’

http://novelanalyst.libsyn.com/harry-potter-and-the-half-blood-prince-by-j-k-rowling-creating-suspense-using-question-arcs

Links:

Ian Irvine – 41 ways to create and heighten suspense: http://www.ian-irvine.com/on-writing/41-ways-to-create-and-heighten-suspense/